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Drawing I was talking about in my journal. No where close to finishing it yet but I wanted some feedback.

First thing is some help with the hand. I can't get it to look right. Something about the angle I think. Or does it just need shading and it will look okay? (Ignore the bracelet thing it needs work to make it look right)

I was also wondering how I should shade this. Do you think it would look better in color (like colored pencil) or just pencil? I sort of want to put it in color. Some light pinks to get this whole "innocent longing" sort of thing I guess.... :shrug:

I don't know. Feedback would be nice. :D Will add to scraps later.

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Hm... She needs to have a more definite chin. And... Maybe make the knuckles more visible? Also, don't put so much emphasis on each tooth, because it usually is just... better that way? I don't have a better explanation.
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Yeah, that all seems to make sense. XD Thanks.

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